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Old 05-27-2008, 04:40 PM   #9
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Default Re: Nothing to see here...

Since you guys didn't help come up with the crazy people, we get a time jump A bad one.Hmm, alright I'll just go in a different direction then. First person this time. But it actually builds this guys character.
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Ugh... My...head...hurts!
They're here. They're always here. Even when it looks like they aren't. They're just there. The chicken scratches on these... padded walls. Thousands of them. Thousands cannot be wrong.

It's-it's-it's changing! New information! Blasted jacket! I can't move around easily... I...just can't get up!

*15 minutes pass*
(Heavy breathing is heard, as if someone is out of breath)
Now to see what the writing on the wall is.

"Doctor, we'll get you out of there"
Yes! I was a doctor! My name was...

That's when the sharp pain entered my skull. It was just too much. I passed out.
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