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Old 05-30-2008, 08:05 PM   #17
chinook
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Default Re: Nothing to see here...

When you want input, do you want us to tell us what we think of your writing, or suggest a direction for the story, or just guess where we think it's going?

I'll do all three, and you can pick the one you like best.

I think your writing is good, definitely. Do you have any other short stories you've written that you are happy with, and would like to show us?

Suggestions for the story? I'd say that it would be fairly interesting if the story was in small arcs, each where his mind was wiped entirely, and things change in each part, subtly or otherwise. Characters change names, roles, and he doesn't remember, but we do. We put the pieces together, while he can't. (Kind of like Memento? But not really...)

And I have no idea where it's going. My guess is he goes ballistic at some point, which I look forward to.
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