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Old 04-09-2008, 02:15 PM   #1
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I recently started a sketchbook, even though i always thought that my drawing was bad. i only draw at school when im bored. anyway, i impressed myself and wanted to share. So please tell me what you think.
i only have a few pages but ill add more when im done.
Unfortunatly, the flash on my moms camera sorta made the pencil look weird.
[ill put the links as to not crowd up the screen]

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/b...ketchbook1.jpg
just random pictures

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/b...ketchbook2.jpg
more randomness

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/b...llowSketch.jpg
i thought it was funny, cause thats exactly how i am.

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/b...kminSketch.jpg
badly drawn battery

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/b...PlaySketch.jpg
starter for a possible webcomic i thought i might do. its unfinished BTW

Now the good stuff
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/b...CubeSketch.jpg
Everyone knows this. [i messed up on the top back right corner]

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/b...MoteSketch.jpg
This is my best one. i started with a square and just randomely added to it. i even impress myself everytime i see this.
[i got this idea from Jamul, from that gallery goal in Supreme]

more to come soon. [hopefully]
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Old 04-09-2008, 02:21 PM   #2
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After first glances, I think they all look good - well done!

I don't have time at the moment, but tomorrow I'll comment on each one individually, just some constructive criticism and whatnot.
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Old 04-09-2008, 06:08 PM   #3
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You don't draw bad! I do! You actually draw fairly well!
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Old 04-09-2008, 08:35 PM   #4
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Man those look good! I wish i could draw that well!
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Old 04-10-2008, 06:12 AM   #5
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Nice drawing. Better than mine. I like it. Good Job!
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Old 04-11-2008, 11:54 AM   #6
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Right, let me have a better look...

1. All very random, which is good. You use nice short lines, which are always best for skecthes, so it helps build up a good shape.

2. Your 'character' pictures are really good, so a comic of some sort wouldn't be a bad idea. I like the finger, as it remidns me of something we had to do in an Art lesson a couple of years ago, drawing out hands in different positions. The finger is a bit long, but other than that the shape is awesome.

3. More random craziness! All I can say is that you have a strange mind.

4. I never actually saw this one the first time around. For a quick draw it's not bad, but if you wanted to do really well, then I would suggest using a ruler on a picture like that, as all of the vertical lines will line up better.

5. Nice little comic. I especially like the 4th image, as the shape and shading are superb. I think you should make other comics, based on your drawing skills.

6. You got the shape of the Companion Cube pretty well, although a couple of the corners aren't exactly in line. You could add more to your drawings with deeper levels of shading. Anyway, where's the cake?

7. This last one in great - modern art!

I wish I could just come up with random things to sketch like that, but my mind is more logical, and less creative. I can really only draw things if I can see them. Anyway, good job on all of those!
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Old 04-11-2008, 01:38 PM   #7
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Lol at the SSBB webcomic.
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3. More random craziness! All I can say is that you have a strange mind.
Thank u, i was going for that, although i prefer the term "insane"
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Lol at the SSBB webcomic.
i know.. its unfinished though, and i gave up on it.
the punchline was gonna be that luigu was in the bag. [get it, mario unkowingly killed [is that too violent for this forum] him]
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Old 04-11-2008, 05:01 PM   #10
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I'm impressed with your Wii Remote drawing! I could never draw something that complex!
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Old 04-11-2008, 05:47 PM   #11
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awesome pictures
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Old 04-11-2008, 07:35 PM   #12
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Thanks for all the comments, criticy people!
I didn't think people would like them so much.
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Didn't you think you wouldn't like them that mutch? I thought it impressed you, so maybe it impresses us to. And I second the wii Controller being really good!

Edit: And the hand. I think drawing hands are really hard!
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Old 04-12-2008, 06:03 AM   #14
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i know! i'm still bad at drawing hands, ive tried blocky hands, round hands, disproportionat hands.
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