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Old 07-25-2006, 03:28 PM   #1
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Default [BOOK]! Bouapha's BrainQuest!

I am writing a book about it!(not a very good title!)

I wont reveal what the book is a bout on this thread enterly! if you want the REAL preview then PM me! you can ask for hints like wil XXX* be in it?

* XXX= a person/character/thing/personage/people/whateverwhatever
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Old 07-25-2006, 05:03 PM   #2
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Where is it?
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Old 07-26-2006, 12:23 PM   #3
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on a cliboard on my dresser!
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Old 07-26-2006, 06:20 PM   #4
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It will be hard for us to read on your dresser. Perhaps you could post a teaser paragraph or two for us.
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Old 07-27-2006, 01:09 PM   #5
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I will do that as soon as i have time.

my dads scanner doesnt work!
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Old 07-27-2006, 01:14 PM   #6
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If it's only one paragraph to show us, you could do it the old-fashioned way and type it in.
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Old 07-27-2006, 01:45 PM   #7
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O.k. here goes



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Originally Posted by my book
The Countess was floating across her lair when the doorbell rang.

"Arise" she said, and a bonehead popped out of the ground and opend th door. CRASH! Thunder clapped and lightning forked across the sky as Dr. Lunatic stood on the threshold.

"Good Evening" The Countess said "Arise" she reapeted. 2 more boneheads appeared and took Loony's hat as the first one made tea

Evening" said loony. "you recieved my message i assume?

Yes said Countess

"well it is up and kicking!"

"Excellent" said the countess

"My dear" Loon's eyes rolled in to the back of his head and straight out the other side" I must see one of your vampires"

"Why?"

" All will become clear"

"Hmm." she thought "Richie!" She finally callerd

"You called?" The Richie Lich replied "My lord!" he said bowing to loony. Let me tell you Richie lich bowing you just have to see to believe.

"You were listening?" the countess said

"Naturally!"

"go to the crpyt. I need a favour........

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DAY 2 , PYGMY ISLAND TEMPLE OF KONGOR!!!!

KONGOR!!!! was glaring at the pgmy he hired as an accountant. The accountant made some miscalculations on the[insert account language here] meaning KONGOR!!!!! was now in huge debt.......
Thats all i have the energy to write. but as you can see it has many inside jokes as too the monsters(countesses "Arise" etc.)

Well? What do you think?
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:02 PM   #8
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It's...Unique but you need more flavor

You need to give it the Dr. Lunatic touch like this...


Chapter 2:

The fortress of Kongor was one of Pygmies and geico insurance, surrounded by lots of trees and rivers it was impossible to reach unless you just walked right up to it.

See? like that , it might not be very funny but it's got the Dr. L. touch.
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thanks but no thanks! its not done yet! i am a perfectoinist(except fror spelin!)
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Old 07-27-2006, 02:12 PM   #10
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Well if you are done lets see the book!
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it's not done yet!
Generous of you to give him 4 minutes to finish it.
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Chapter 2:

The fortress of Kongor was one of Pygmies and geico insurance, surrounded by lots of trees and rivers it was impossible to reach unless you just walked right up to it.

See? like that , it might not be very funny but it's got the Dr. L. touch.
Hahaha, that *is* funny! It might be a good idea to put in some stuff like that in the story.
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