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Old 07-24-2008, 02:40 PM   #41
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I thought we agree'd I was the ilistrator
no, i dont recall saying that, no. sorry. im only drawing these to give you an idea of what they look like. you did tell me to do that. The tin masters have weapons on them, though. lots of them.
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Old 07-26-2008, 02:09 AM   #42
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The tin henchmen slammed the doors open and walked in. "WE ARE THE TIN HENCHMAN. SURRENDE...." "yeah yeah we heard you the first time." Roo tried punching them. and jumping on them. and shooting water at them but then he remembered that they had armour. "oh, come on! sureley there must be some way to defeat you!" "NO. NOT TO MY KNOWLEDGE." Crocodilus pushed them out of the way an' ran through the door. Only to find a large crowd of tin henchmen and tin masters. "WE ARE TIN MASTERS. JUST... DIE THIS TIME." "No way... i'll pummel all of yus!" Crocodilus cut through the croud... then came running back. they were too much for them!
how on earth do you beat these guys?!
To Be Continued...

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Old 07-26-2008, 04:35 AM   #43
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Crocodilus put ALL of his energy into one punch. It dented the armour. Pshaw. Pathetic. Useless. Crocodilus needed a rest. Roo gave him a drink. One of the tin henchman looked at the drink then he remember he handnt went for a little private time since he was put in armour. He started doing a little dance... then he couldnt hold it in any longer. he let it out. (okay, lets move off of this for a sec.) "Hmmmm... is it just me or is that tin henchman getting bigger?" It was. the urine inside of it was expanding the armour. he could explode any minuite! The armour RIPPED to peices. Revealing the blackroo clone on the inside. "Oh, yeah! brilliant!" Roo threatened it with some water and it ran away. Then, loads of tin henchman started exploding then running away.
Brilliant! now, what's Dr. J up to?
To Be Continued...
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Old 07-27-2008, 02:33 AM   #44
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Heres a brilliant game! its called gibrak exterminator and its super fun! (for me)
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Old 07-28-2008, 07:16 AM   #45
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The R3 gang went back to base when Crocodilus's Phone rang.
To Be continued...
sorry, that bit didnt last long.
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Old 07-29-2008, 02:14 PM   #46
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R3 were fast asleep, only to be awoken by Tin_henchman (a wikipedia page! yaaay!) knocking at the door. then barging it down. "We are the Tin henchmen. Surrender and die." roo looked inside the eyeglass on the tin henchman... he saw... Blackroo clones! the armour was full of transformonium!
Sorry, i'll be back with more soon.
In the Bolded Grey bit about the Tin Henchmen, Shouldnt it be Surrender OR die? Because if it is Surrender And die they dont really have any choice, since they're going to die anyway.
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Crocodilus put ALL of his energy into one punch. It dented the armour. Pshaw. Pathetic. Useless. Crocodilus needed a rest. Roo gave him a drink. One of the tin henchman looked at the drink then he remember he handnt went for a little private time since he was put in armour. He started doing a little dance... then he couldnt hold it in any longer. he let it out. (okay, lets move off of this for a sec.) "Hmmmm... is it just me or is that tin henchman getting bigger?" It was. the urine inside of it was expanding the armour. he could explode any minuite! The armour RIPPED to peices. Revealing the blackroo clone on the inside. "Oh, yeah! brilliant!" Roo threatened it with some water and it ran away. Then, loads of tin henchman started exploding then running away.
Brilliant! now, what's Dr. J up to?
To Be Continued...
LOL. XD

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Old 07-29-2008, 02:16 PM   #47
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Oh! thank you, thank, you, thank you! Next Part of the story COMIN' UP!
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Old 07-29-2008, 02:28 PM   #48
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Yay! So it will continue!

Sorry I didn't comment about it before. I just didn't have anything to say.
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Old 07-29-2008, 02:49 PM   #49
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The Story Goes On...
After a large amount of exchanges of "yeahs, uh huhs, rights, ohs, i sees, i understands." A shocked face grew on crocodilus's face. He hung up. "Guys, weve got a factory to infiltrate." When they arrived, they saw a large grey metal building with a giant battery attached to it. Where Dr. J gets his technology from is but a mystery. Roo raised his hands as iff he was bout to soot water at the battery but crocodilus stopped him. "We need to see what Dr. J is up to first!" they went inside. Oh! the HORROR! Theyre... theyre...
Making tin henchmen!
To Be Continued...
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Old 07-30-2008, 01:33 AM   #50
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"Noooo! how are we going to make all of these need to *Cough!* urinate *Cough!*" "Crush, sit on that conveyor belt to break it. Trub, Smash that transformonium container. Roo, add water to that transformonium so it can never come to life." "got it." They did as told. "Duuuuuudes. what's up, Roo bro?" "Chillin', man, chillin." "Heeeeey, i could heat up that liquid and boil it. Just to make sure its uhh... no longer living?" "Go for it, Bro." As requested, he boiled the liquid. Then the door slammed open. "I thought you would return. but i came prepared this time. youre too late. the next batch of tin henchmen are already created. And blackroo will soon be beating the living daylights out of you. face it. this world is mine. Soon the population of the world will be TIN HENCHMAN! MUHAHAHAHA!"
I think i'll put it at a cliffhanger there.
To Be Continued...
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Old 07-30-2008, 01:53 AM   #51
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"Not if we can stop you!" Roo ran towards Dr. J only to be stopped by a maniacal laughter. Blackroo! He appeared in the middle of to room. The room was to small for him and J-Corp exploded. BOOM! gone. Well, at least they wont have to worry about that no more. "Chiiiil, bro." "Who brought the hippy?" "I did." Blackroo took on the form of crush. "Yes! Such a strng body! i could stay in this for for a while!"
Oh, no. I forgot he could do that!
End of Episode 2...
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Old 07-30-2008, 01:54 AM   #52
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Doh. I hate cliffhangers. Oh well, i'll wait.
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Old 07-30-2008, 03:38 AM   #53
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R3 Commentary! listen to it. NOW.
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Old 07-30-2008, 03:55 AM   #54
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I also did some commantary !

http://www.mediafire.com/?ztj1szgmvvz
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WOWZORZ! this is awesome!!!!! keep it up!
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Old 07-31-2008, 09:09 AM   #56
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Another fan! Thank you! Roo adventure is coming up(game), and we cant make it without resistance force four! (our fans.) Click here for the official site!
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Old 08-03-2008, 02:41 AM   #57
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With a swift jump, roo drop-kicked crush. "Ouch! Hey what was that for?" "Oops, sorry." Then he drop kicked the OTHER crush. Only to have his leg grabbed and thrown on the ground. "yep, that's blackroo. Water beam!" "Ouch! help! im sinking!"
this is going to be easier than i thought!
To be continued...
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Old 08-04-2008, 09:33 PM   #58
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The story is good so far. Will you put all the bits together into bunches of paragraphs and put it on the R3 website?

I could do it for you if you want.
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Old 08-05-2008, 07:49 AM   #59
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do you have a wp account? if so, what email did you use to create your account? (so i can make you admin)
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Old 08-05-2008, 08:49 AM   #60
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Wow, it's a pretty good story! Everybody who's saying it's bad should read it all. I stopped at the first part, but came back just now. And it's pretty good.
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